America has problems, but America is NOT THE PROBLEM!~
He was .........
Published on October 17, 2005 By Moderateman In Fiction Writing
There is a saying in New York City, from the streets. Having a reputation as a stand-up guy, someone that "had your back"
was the highest compliment you could give.

Knock around guy was one of these guys, someone you could always count on in a street war, A guy that wore the scars of battle proudly, the busted nose, the scar tissue build up around his eyebrows, these markers shouted to the world "do not fuck with this guy" tread at your own peril. The knuckles of his huge hands scared and calloused from his many combats.

For a living this guy use to "bounce" although most of the time a simple word form knock-around was enough to defuse most situations with no violence.

Knock-around had a secret, a secret he shared with no one. He wanted to be At peace, with himself and the world at large.

Knock-around was a ladies man, for some reason ladies seemed to be drawn to knock-around, it sure was not his looks, he was by no means a pretty boy, something he scorned by the way. Maybe it was in a city filled with so much violence, they felt safe with him at there side.

He fought most of his life, from the age of 15 on all he could remember was endless combats, endless visits to the doctors, till he learned to repair his own body, he has skill with a suturing needle and catgut, he got so good at sewing himself up soon you could not tell the difference from his work and the doctors, he took pride in this.

By the time he was 22 he was known in all 5 boros as someone to be reckoned with, He relished the fear in men's eyes as they saw him and the looks of lust from the women's faces.

One night while walking on park ave. between 122nd street and 123rd street someone put four bullets in knock-arounds back, he died the way he lived, violently.

His last thought before the black came was "peace at last" then he expired. some constructive criticism is most welcomed, otherwise please behave, I am in a MOOD today.

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on Oct 17, 2005
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on Oct 17, 2005
MM,

Wow that is quite a story. I guess maybe knock around was born in the wrong century. An earlier century may have seen him a skilled knight, or military man.

I used to be a pretty physical gal, in highschool. I was always quick to lift my fists because it always made me feel so much better to knock the crap out of someone than to argue. I wasn't a large girl but athletic and I went to 5 diff highschools. It always seemed like the tuff girls would have to "try" me at my new school. They'd always approach me in a group and feel me out. I learned right off that I had to catch each one of them alone, and beat the shit out of her, so no one else would mess with me. It worked EVERY time. Usually once I got the head girl beat I was good.

All that to say this. A friend told me something in highschool I've never forgotten and it seems like it applies here. She said, "If you keep on. One day we will find your body in the gutter probably with a slit throat."

That was her modern day version of, "He who lives by the sword, dies by the sword."

It's too bad the cowards who shot knock around in THE BACK, couldn't meet him on his own terms. Guns are what cowards use when they are too weak to take a beating....
on Oct 17, 2005
#2 by Tova7
Monday, October 17, 2005


MM,

Wow that is quite a story. I guess maybe knock around was born in the wrong century. An earlier century may have seen him a skilled knight, or military man.


thanx tova, this "story is a mix of truth and fiction" I will leave it to the reader to seperate the two.

I use to be a pretty fair hand with my "smitties" too.

smitties is newyorkese for hands btw.
on Oct 17, 2005
Semi Autobigraphical?
on Oct 17, 2005
#4 by Dr. Guy
Monday, October 17, 2005


Semi Autobigraphical?


indeed doc.
on Oct 17, 2005
Semi Autobigraphical?


Ok, I get it.

Sorry, I am doing laundry and cleaning house getting ready for husband to get home and flying in and out of JU pretty fast....so I am not at the top of my game.

Why are you in a mood today?

on Oct 17, 2005
#6 by Tova7
Monday, October 17, 2005


Semi Autobigraphical?


Ok, I get it.

Sorry, I am doing laundry and cleaning house getting ready for husband to get home and flying in and out of JU pretty fast....so I am not at the top of my game.

Why are you in a mood today?



some days the HEP C kicks my ass harder than others.
on Oct 17, 2005

indeed doc.

Glad to see you outgrew it.  The world would have been a very poor place without you.

on Oct 17, 2005

some days the HEP C kicks my ass harder than others.

And then you just get back up and kick it back harder.

on Oct 17, 2005
#8 by Dr. Guy
Monday, October 17, 2005


indeed doc.

Glad to see you outgrew it. The world would have been a very poor place without you


on the QT doc, was still brawling into my late 40's and winning too. heh
on Oct 17, 2005
#9 by Dr. Guy
Monday, October 17, 2005


some days the HEP C kicks my ass harder than others.

And then you just get back up and kick it back harder.


I always get back up doc, be it from a knockdown to an illness.
on Oct 17, 2005
Sorry to hear you are not feeling well. ((((MM))))
on Oct 17, 2005
12 by Tova7
Monday, October 17, 2005


Sorry to hear you are not feeling well. ((((MM))))


{{[tova}}}} I was just explaining why I am in a mood, not complaining, I made this particular bed, now I lay in it. K?
on Oct 17, 2005

on the QT doc, was still brawling into my late 40's and winning too. heh

YOu are only in your late 40s?  I took you for older.

on Oct 17, 2005
#14 by Dr. Guy
Monday, October 17, 2005


on the QT doc, was still brawling into my late 40's and winning too. heh

YOu are only in your late 40s? I took you for older.


way older doc, 59 now.. and to think it was a short 10 or 12 years ago I was ..... well you know.
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