America has problems, but America is NOT THE PROBLEM!~
He was .........
Published on October 17, 2005 By Moderateman In Fiction Writing
There is a saying in New York City, from the streets. Having a reputation as a stand-up guy, someone that "had your back"
was the highest compliment you could give.

Knock around guy was one of these guys, someone you could always count on in a street war, A guy that wore the scars of battle proudly, the busted nose, the scar tissue build up around his eyebrows, these markers shouted to the world "do not fuck with this guy" tread at your own peril. The knuckles of his huge hands scared and calloused from his many combats.

For a living this guy use to "bounce" although most of the time a simple word form knock-around was enough to defuse most situations with no violence.

Knock-around had a secret, a secret he shared with no one. He wanted to be At peace, with himself and the world at large.

Knock-around was a ladies man, for some reason ladies seemed to be drawn to knock-around, it sure was not his looks, he was by no means a pretty boy, something he scorned by the way. Maybe it was in a city filled with so much violence, they felt safe with him at there side.

He fought most of his life, from the age of 15 on all he could remember was endless combats, endless visits to the doctors, till he learned to repair his own body, he has skill with a suturing needle and catgut, he got so good at sewing himself up soon you could not tell the difference from his work and the doctors, he took pride in this.

By the time he was 22 he was known in all 5 boros as someone to be reckoned with, He relished the fear in men's eyes as they saw him and the looks of lust from the women's faces.

One night while walking on park ave. between 122nd street and 123rd street someone put four bullets in knock-arounds back, he died the way he lived, violently.

His last thought before the black came was "peace at last" then he expired. some constructive criticism is most welcomed, otherwise please behave, I am in a MOOD today.

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on Oct 17, 2005
15 by little_whip
Monday, October 17, 2005


I'm your knock-around broad, Elie, at least on the 'net.

And no-one's gonna shoot me in the back, although I have pulled a few knives out.


this I know sabrina, and no one knows better than I how you have my cyberback. thanx.
on Oct 18, 2005
Knock around guy seemed to have been a great guy to have as a friend. He's all macho and yet a sweetheart at the same time. He would definately be a character I would enjoy reading more about or watching on television. Nice Elie. Too bad he died so quickly.
on Oct 18, 2005
interesting story, MM

Ever read any Anthony Bourdain books? If you haven't I suggest you read "The Bobby Gold Stories". You may like it. It's a quick, fun and interesting read. It's about a New York knock around guy.
on Oct 19, 2005
Reply By: foreverserenityPosted: Tuesday, October 18, 2005Knock around guy seemed to have been a great guy to have as a friend. He's all macho and yet a sweetheart at the same time. He would definately be a character I would enjoy reading more about or watching on television. Nice Elie. Too bad he died so quickly.


trust me on this one forever, knock around was a prick, not a nice man at all.
on Oct 19, 2005
Reply By: uDigItTheMostPosted: Tuesday, October 18, 2005interesting story, MMEver read any Anthony Bourdain books? If you haven't I suggest you read "The Bobby Gold Stories". You may like it. It's a quick, fun and interesting read. It's about a New York knock around guy.


nope have not and will see if I can. thanx
on Oct 20, 2005
trust me on this one forever, knock around was a prick, not a nice man at all.


Hmmm, I hear ya Elie....probably because of his life experiences uh! I've seen a few characters like him, don't know any personally but have seen them!
on Oct 20, 2005
#22 by foreverserenity
Thursday, October 20, 2005


Hmmm, I hear ya Elie....probably because of his life experiences uh! I've seen a few characters like him, don't know any personally but have seen them!


donna? knockaround guy, is based on me sweety. so you do know him {kinda}
on Oct 21, 2005
Been sitting here after reading and reading all the comments. I find that I am almost at a loss as to what to say, as it has sprung up in me too many emotions. Then, it hits me. Here was knockaround. Feared. loved by the ladies. Taking great pride in who he had become. He lived , and others felt safe around him. He had ladies for the taking. Those who were a friend knew he had their backs. He walked without fear, as he was feared. Yet, dispite his ability to fend for himself from the time he was young, when the cowardly act happened, his last thoughts were "peace at last." It strikes me, how hurting knockaround was inside and no one seem to know this. I wonder if anyone of the people he friended, and made feel safe saw this in his eyes. I suspect not. knockaround would have shown no fear. not on the street, and not in a one to one conversation. It overwhelms me to think of knockaround, underneath all that he was just wanted peace. HE JUST WANTED PEACE. MAY PEACE FIND YOU KNOCKAROUND.
on Oct 21, 2005
Reply By: THEWINDRAGES(Anonymous User)Posted: Friday, October 21, 2005Been sitting here after reading and reading all the comments. I find that I am almost at a loss as to what to say, as it has sprung up in me too many emotions. Then, it hits me. Here was knockaround. Feared. loved by the ladies. Taking great pride in who he had become. He lived , and others felt safe around him. He had ladies for the taking. Those who were a friend knew he had their backs. He walked without fear, as he was feared. Yet, dispite his ability to fend for himself from the time he was young, when the cowardly act happened, his last thoughts were "peace at last." It strikes me, how hurting knockaround was inside and no one seem to know this. I wonder if anyone of the people he friended, and made feel safe saw this in his eyes. I suspect not. knockaround would have shown no fear. not on the street, and not in a one to one conversation. It overwhelms me to think of knockaround, underneath all that he was just wanted peace. HE JUST WANTED PEACE. MAY PEACE FIND YOU KNOCKAROUND.


what a lovely thing to write, thank you so much.
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