The Stranger, seen through the eyes of his lover.

run in sentence form

Published on August 31, 2007 By Moderateman In Fiction Writing

Angelwasquiteamanshethought,hehadalltheattributesthatmadeherbodytinglefromheadtotoe.Hisintellectwasbeyondcompare,

theamountofinformationhecouldprocesssoveryquicklyleftherinawe.

Shestillhadaproblemwithwhatheusetodoforaliving,buthtatwasbehindthemnowashewasretiredandplaneedtonevertakeuphisoldprofessionagain. Thoughtsofmarriagewereonhermindnowsinceheproposedandsheacceptedhisproposal.

Whatcolortowearwasabothersomeitemnowasshewastraditionalinthinkingandbelievedthatwhitewasreservedforvirgins,

whichshewasnotanymoreaftersurrenderinghervirginitylongagointhebackseatofacarwhenshewasbut15yearsold.

Allsherememberedoftheeventwashowfastitwasover,hissweatingbodyontopofher,slightlyhurtingherasheenteredher,thenashudderashecameso

quicklyshewasnotreallysurethedeedhadhappenedatall.Angelwasakindandconsideratelover,gentlebutyetwhenhemadelovetoherhetookcommandand

madesurethatshewaspleasedinwaysshehadneverexperencedbefore.Tobelovedbythismanwastobetrulylovedinallthewaysawomancouldthinkof.

Sometimesinthedarkofthenightthethoughtsofhowhemadethemoneytheywerecomfortablylivingonshookhertothecoreofherbeing,shewasnotaworldly

woman,sheworriedthatonedaythelawwouldcatchuptoAngelandtheirworldwouldcomecrumblingdownontheirheads,whenshespokeofthistoAngelhe

wouldjusttellhernottoworrytherewasnowayhecouldbetracedtothecrimesnoevidencelinkinghimtotheworkhehaddone,nooneleftalivetofingerhimtothe

F.B.I.TherewasnotevensuspicitionthathewasthePROFESSORaninternationalassassionthatalwaysgotthejobdoneandchargedfivetotenmillionahitat

theendofhiscarreerplusexpensis,heneverkeptthewaeponthatheusedonajobheneverdidajobinacitywherehemightberecognized,hewasthebestathis

professionmeticulousinhisplanningandalwayscarriedajobout,heneverfailed,hegothismoneyhalfupfront,halfafterthejobwasdone,onlyonepersona

Columbiandruglordtriedtowelshonthe'after'payment'thinkingwhatcouldhedo?twodayslaterhewasshotintheforeheadwhilehavingbreakfastwithhiswifeandchildren.Thewordspreadandafterthatnoonetriedtoskipapaymenttohim.

Shesilentlyprayedthatthisdreamwouldneverend,afterallwhocouldhaveeverpredictedthatshewouldfallinlovewithsomeonelikeAngelinthefirstplace?

Comments

Texas Wahine

on Aug 31, 2007

Ouch.

Moderateman

on Aug 31, 2007

SincethestaffhasdecidedtoputmeonthepaymenofuckingmindlistIthoughtIwouldjuststartwritinganyfuckingpeiceofshittrashifeltlikeIjustmightstartspamming

theforumsbecauseIcan.ImeanWTFwho'scerealdidIpissin?Ihavereachedthestageofbeingveryannoyedwithwhoeverdecidedwhatgetsfeaturedandwhatdoesnot.

SoIamtakingafewdaysoffstartingsundaybecauseIamgoingtomycondoontheoceanwithColleenandspendingsometimethereandforget

aboutjoefuckinguserforawhilebecausefranklytheysuckrightnow!

Sorryaboutyourheadachemysweetfriend,IwilltryandcallyoutommorowbecauserightnowtheonlythingaboutjoefuckinguserIlikeisyouandacouplemore

peoplebutnoneasmuchasyou.

Texas Wahine

on Aug 31, 2007

LOL. Creative way to convey pissed-offedness.

Gideon MacLeish

on Aug 31, 2007

Ihavereachedthestageofbeingveryannoyedwithwhoeverdecidedwhatgetsfeaturedandwhatdoesnot.

Yeah. I had one article over the last two weeks that I thought truly deserved a feature.

Here's a hint: the one they featured wasn't it!

Moderateman

on Aug 31, 2007

Reply By: Gideon MacLeishPosted: Friday, August 31, 2007
Ihavereachedthestageofbeingveryannoyedwithwhoeverdecidedwhatgetsfeaturedandwhatdoesnot.

Yeah. I had one article over the last two weeks that I thought truly deserved a feature.

Here's a hint: the one they featured wasn't it!

BeensixweekssinceIbeenfeaturedgidthatincludedonearticlewith400repliesandtwoarticleswithover100replies,maybesevenweeks.

theactualdatewasjuly7th.

Moderateman

on Aug 31, 2007

Reply By: Texas WahinePosted: Friday, August 31, 2007

. Creative way to convey pissed-offedness.

ThankyoutexIaimtobedifferent.

foreverserenity

on Sep 01, 2007

At 12:54am and very tired eyes...OUCH!

IhearyaIunderstandItotallyagreeandIlove you!

Moderateman

on Sep 01, 2007

Moderateman

on Sep 02, 2007

I am outta here till the sixth.. have a good one, everyone.

Buuuuu bye

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